Indicators of an Evil and Wicked Heart. Conclusion does not summarize main points. Background details are a random collection of information, unclear, or not related to the topic. The main idea or a thesis statement is clearly defined. Stronger support and greater attention to details would strengthen this paper.
Does the conclusion restate the main ideas and go beyond? Being Content with Myself, finding the Flexibility to Survive, the Triumph of Kindness. Sentences are strong and expressive with varied structure Writer's voice is consistent and strong. . Does it include all the writers' main points?
Are there spelling, punctuation and capitalization errors that distract? The reader feels a strong sense of interaction with the writer and senses the person behind the words. Sentence structure shows some variety. Writing is smooth, skillful, and coherent. . Is the writers voice apparent? . Thesis is vague or unclear. Back to Student Learning Tools. As heard on This I Believe Podcast, October 8, 2018. Is it consistent through out the paper? Appropriate relevant information and details are shared from a variety of sources including personal experiences, observations, and prior knowledge. What kind of world are we leaving younger generations? Are there sufficient details, clearly explained?